Audience Reaction- Rough Cut on Prezi
Audience feedback- Class
Audience feedback- Class
Today as a class we took some time to get reaction from our fellow classmates. We sat around as a class and devised questions as group on what we wanted to find out. My group divided it up into Camerawork, Music, Titles, challenging conventions and other general points.
Camerawork
Good
- Good variety of shots that make the story easy to follow. Especially the low angle shot of the protagonist in the bathroom and the high angle shot of him walking on the road.
- The shots for each scene were appropriate and allowed us to see the characters emotion. Also allowed us to spot any important features such as the blood on his hand.
Improvement
- Shake of camera before entering the building is unprofessional and distorts the audiences view of the film.
- Shot reverse shot is needed in order to make the exchange between the two characters more realistic. Also there needs to be a cut to another image while they are talking.
Music
Good
- Original and well constructed music. The fact that you did not add pre-made Imovie songs made it look authentic.
- Background sound in exchange of dialogue makes it hard to follow the conversation.
Improvement
- It is important that your Non- diegetic sounds like the alarm clock sync in perfectly or it makes it look a tad 'tacky'
Titles
Good
- You added Imovie ones whihc are ok for now.
Improvement
- There were non and they need to be added. The title of the movie came up as a separate frame on a Imovie background and that is a shame as you have worked hard to make it look original.
Challenging conventions
Good
- Murder and blood make it look and feel like a thriller film.
Improvement
- Cuts are too slow
General points
Good
- You have grasped the general aspects of a thriller and it genuinely looks like a thriller
Improvement
- Scripting is bad, 'killer is on the loose'
- Acting needs to be sharper as the supporting character doesn't look a genuine character in the film.
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